05:3505:35, 26 December 2021diffhist−39
Yume 2kki:Authors
Made various grammatical changes and reworded several sentences that sounded off. I could not reword all of them smooth enough and some sentences are extremely long but I think I did a good job cleaning up some of the simple stuff. wXeoWvpbbM could be worded a bit better and juda's still contains a run-on sentence that I do not know how to word properly.
04:2904:29, 26 December 2021diffhist+2
Yume 2kki:Tricolor Room
Renamed the Piano Girl to Piano Player as Spelude has stated that their name is the Piano Player and not the Piano Girl. Whether or not this means they are genderless I do not know. However I have changed all pronouns mentioning them to they/them for now.
